About 6 months ago I bought a computer and the reason why I bought this computer is because without this computer I would have hard time to do all my assignment. I used my computer almost every day, and it’s every important to me because I contact some of my friends though the internet. My computer helps me a lot because I search everything I need in my computer for example, if I don’t know how to spell a word I just go to Google and type it and then I come out.
Hi, Nasir. You did a good job of explaining why you wanted to get a computer, but you missed the most important questions from the prompt: Was the brand of computer important? What or who convinced you to buy that particular computer? (Since we're considering advertising, we're interested in figuring out how much influence ads have on what you buy.) Grade: .5/1
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