Wednesday, April 27, 2011

two biggest issues

The two biggest issues that I had in my first paper is less explanation. I have good points but I didn’t explain every well so readers will have some questions about the topic because I didn’t explain enough. For example my first paragraph when I said “The first time I looked at the advertisement, the first thing that I saw was a text that read” readers may say what advertisement he talking about. So how I can make it clear on this paragraph is to tell what kind of advertisement I’m talking about which is the Honda advertisement. The second biggest issues I had are quotation mark I get a lot text from the advertisement but I didn’t use the quotation. For example zero down payment, zero security deposit, zero first-month payment, and zero due at lease signing. After I wrote this I should put the quotation mark because I get this from the advertisement, and I will put those quotations in there.

Monday, April 25, 2011

naysayer

Naysayer make writing better so if the writer add his writing naysayer the readers will understand it.


Naysayer is what the readers say about the topic that the writes will prove it. naysayer say opposite things all the time. It’s important because the writer put some they said in his or her writing.


Wednesday, April 20, 2011

topic

The top I can talk about hours and hours is my work. I been working this job about almost three years now and I know everything about this job. i can work everywhere except the management. So if other people want talk about what my company does obviously I can tell them what we do and I can talk about what we do and how we sell our product a hours because have three experiences. For example we give a respect our customaries; we try making them cool down if they mad. We tell them right away if we have any special is going on so they can take Advantech if they want.

Monday, April 18, 2011

class work

The explanation that given to the claim that quotations are like orphans is words taking from original place and you put somewhere else then you “as a writer” explain why you put it there in your own words.

Wednesday, April 13, 2011

this is what the aedicule about

This article talks about the international marketing. First it talked about the Domino’s pizza company, and how they deliver their product to the customer. This company has 1,160 stories in 46 countries around the world. Then it talked about auto companies. After that this article talked about a company called Green Giant. This company is an American company that sell corn, while this company is selling their product, it faced some cultural difficulty. Some people who live in other countries didn't like their product. Also this article talks about how American companies are popular in Japan. Over all this article is about international markets and economies.

Wednesday, April 6, 2011

Conversation

Conversation is the informal exchange of views, ideas, or information.


Writing conversation is academic writing that the reader can understand very well, and writer has to put action words in the writing conversation because those words may make the readers easy to understand.

Monday, April 4, 2011

my computer

About 6 months ago I bought a computer and the reason why I bought this computer is because without this computer I would have hard time to do all my assignment. I used my computer almost every day, and it’s every important to me because I contact some of my friends though the internet. My computer helps me a lot because I search everything I need in my computer for example, if I don’t know how to spell a word I just go to Google and type it and then I come out.