Monday, May 2, 2011

Jeannette mom

Jeannette her mom was not a good mom. She didn’t care about her children because Jeannette when she was 3 years old she used to cook food because her mom didn't cook food for her, so she have to cook food for herself. We don’t usually see 3 years old cook, but Jeannette was a cook because she didn’t had a good mom who can take care of her. So one day she was cooking a hot dog and she burn herself because she was a litter girl and she don’t know how to cook that well. After when Jeannette get old her mom was not change she was still care less mom and even this time she seem is like she is homeless like Jeannette said, she probably looked like any of the thousands of homeless people in New York City. What she means about this is now her mom she doesn’t even care herself, because she saw her mom around the dumpster and she was not looking normal.

1 comment:

  1. Good concrete evidence. Make sure to cite page numbers for specific evidence you give, though.

    Also, I'm not sure how the support you have reinforces the topic sentence?

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